She Doesn't Know Why She Lives. - Vol. 2 Ch. 14 - Worst Office Lady

[MangaDex]

 

[BadWithNames]

IT'S BACK

 

[LadMan]

I've missed this

 

[DrWhoCares]

@LO_ORE
Lots of mistakes and issues.
Biggest one being "Even tough".

It's spelled "even though".

 

[LO_ORE]

@DrWhoCares
Sorry, it's the first time I do something like this.
Can you list the other issues? Could be useful for the next chapter

 

[Yautja]

@LO_ORE
Word of advice, try making the font sizing bigger, big enough to have little to no left over space but small enough room to squeeze a few words on each line, unless you reach a point where you have to hyphenate words, because that font is tiny and quite hard to read.

 

[Ydo22]

DEPRESSION TIME BOYS

 

[Itsn]

It's back

The manga of our lives

is back

@LO_ORE It'd be a good idea to ask for someone to proofread it if you're not 100% sure about some parts; Also what Yautja said about the font size.

 

[Alleras]

@LO_ORE
Thanks for picking this up

 

[Randomizer]

Ha, what a loser.
What a cute loser.

Makes me remember how in my childhood I was eating existential dread each morning for breakfast.

 

[neinonein]

@LO_ORE thanks a lot for picking this up! I'll have to go with the other on the font size, kind of hard to read it on mobile.

 

[XieShu]

Thank you for picking this up,

 

[pl3b]

i hope you redo this chapter with a bigger font, my poor eyes can't read it.

 

[seireitei92]

Man this really hit to close to home, I can't even cry or quit my job because if I quit then nobody will eat in my house yet nobody cares about my depression and anxiety hell I even stopped feeling anything at one point

 

[zdarkbrz_816]

Oh, here we go... DEPRESSION

 

[OniBarubary]

Yay! It's back!

...I mean...yay. It's...sigh

 

[Fluffyfish]

Thanks for picking this up. This manga really is unique. And hurts me on a deep level.

 

[vinabomb]

Time for the depresso espresso

 

[ProxyEgo]

thank you for your hard work, scanlator. needed this catharsis

 

[DrWhoCares]

@LO_ORE
I actually just recently started helping someone else as they just started out as well.
I suggest getting a good proofreader.
Also you should claim your group.

The biggest issue, other than the one I pointed out, is your typesetting. Which I can't help you much on that. I know people who know it, but you'd be best listening to others with more experience than I, in order to fix it.

"soap was almost over"
Soap does not "over".
"Crap... I forgot that I'm almost out of soap..."

There's other issues, but I don't have the time to spend to point them all out. The other issues are less egregious and more pedantic. Please continue to work hard on improving yourself, as I would hate to see this series marred by subpar quality.
Should you ever have any questions, or need any help, feel free to contact me. Message me on discord for a more rapid response. My discord server is on my group page, SlowAF, from there you can find my discord, should you choose that option.

Also, don't forget that you can upload a new version with fixes, by clicking the pencil icon next to the chapter, and reuploading the new zip.