ShenHao's Heavenly fall System
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somehow came across this
1. translation is horrible especially the grammar
2. way too short for what I'll say for 3
3. already asking passively for money through a Patreon
The art in the manhua is passable but the plot is already weird, not even clear what is really happening in the first chap (possibly due to translation)
1. translation is horrible especially the grammar
2. way too short for what I'll say for 3
3. already asking passively for money through a Patreon
The art in the manhua is passable but the plot is already weird, not even clear what is really happening in the first chap (possibly due to translation)
iluvfries
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To be very honest, I agree with meowmeow here. The translations are all wrong, being a CTL and seeing that this is what was translated kind of hurts my heart. People be ruining a good manhua with their poor translations. Also, please do not blame the raws on this, the raws are fine, the rating on the raws is 9.3/10, if the raws and the plot are just like you said, "like that", then it doesn't deserve a 9.3/10 does it?
To proof my point, I've picked out some mistranslations:
萧歌， 二叔一家向来不喜欢你
Their tl: My second Uncle's Family doesn't like to see you
My tl: Xiao Ge, second uncle's whole family has never liked you.
你就不要进去了，在这里等我。
Their tl: Xiao Ge, you don't have to in, wait here
My tl: It's better if you don't enter, wait for me here.
等你大学毕业， 我就能过好日子啦。
Their tl: I hope! Someday we will live a better life. So we can take care of others around us.
My tl: Once you graduated from college, then I would be able to live a happy life.
To proof my point, I've picked out some mistranslations:
萧歌， 二叔一家向来不喜欢你
Their tl: My second Uncle's Family doesn't like to see you
My tl: Xiao Ge, second uncle's whole family has never liked you.
你就不要进去了，在这里等我。
Their tl: Xiao Ge, you don't have to in, wait here
My tl: It's better if you don't enter, wait for me here.
等你大学毕业， 我就能过好日子啦。
Their tl: I hope! Someday we will live a better life. So we can take care of others around us.
My tl: Once you graduated from college, then I would be able to live a happy life.
Umm I'm a ctl and your tl IS really off. Let's not talk about the translation first, what's with the capital letters mid sentence? Also, isn't it the bare minimum to capitalize the "I"? And you just removed a whole sfx in a panel then don't typeset it. Aight, now on to the tl. I must say I'm impressed with the way you interpret things. Idek how you can get "uncle and your father are brothers..." from "老婆对不起都怪我没用。". And "I hope someday we'll live a better life..." from "等你大学毕业，我就能过好日子啦" Then you have "only women in my Zhao family"
Umm that sentence on it's own is gramatically wrong, but we won't talk about that. He's saying that the guy is more like a son-in-law rather than a daughter-in-law... Anyway, you even have a patreon set up for readers to pay for THIS quality. Umm, this is just an advice though, I hope you improve your scans in MANY ways before actually receiving the money. Sorry if I come off harsh, and good luck in your future endeavors!
Umm that sentence on it's own is gramatically wrong, but we won't talk about that. He's saying that the guy is more like a son-in-law rather than a daughter-in-law... Anyway, you even have a patreon set up for readers to pay for THIS quality. Umm, this is just an advice though, I hope you improve your scans in MANY ways before actually receiving the money. Sorry if I come off harsh, and good luck in your future endeavors!
