Shijou Saikyou no Mahou Kenshi, F Rank Boukensha ni Tensei Suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

Plot that’s happened within the first six chapters (read: almost 3/4 of a regular tankobon):

>MC was a swordsman and a sage before reincarnating as a kid
>Fights some goblins or some shit
>Met a slime
>Makes water
>Goes to an adventurer’s guild

He hasn’t even met the main heroines yet.
 
All that and the guy didn't even introduce/vouch for him, just showed him the building and left
 
for someone who has lived 2 entire lifetimes and one of them being as the worlds most wise sage he sure is one clueless mother fucker...
 
Well, if you're in an Isekai its within the realm of possibility that you wont think to stop and smell the roses.
 
@Ptakers: 15 pages isn't the problem. Nothing happening on them it is. If a mangaka draws a manga with that pacing you'd expect him to publish 40ish pages. Or 15-20 with a faster pacing. I fully concur with you. This is ...wow. What comes next chapter. Him eating a soup at the guild. Shown from 8 different angels?
 
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So the drought/water storage is gone now? That's really unbelievable, even if he made a metric fuck ton of water it wouldn't be enough to supply a town for more than a day. But the underlying cause of said water shortage and why that town is still there and plot holes as far as the eye can see..
 
@Doomer
Even if the hero must be wise, he is limited by the author who is surely an idiot
In any case, he does not know how to write a story..
 
Author is really stupid. Water shortage wouldn't end with creating water but let's forget that. Wasn't MC tired of being being focus of attention in his previous lives? Yet in this one he does things as flashy as he can.
To much stupidity for me.
 
@Solaz Of course he did.
Look at it this way, you're a carpenter with a rock-moving problem and your employer says he won't help you, rather he'll wreck you if you don't finish the house on time. Suddenly some armed hobo turns up and wants a quick job for some cash. You tell him your problem to get him to move on without starting a fight, but he starts stalling you. Then almost off-handedly he crushes the huge damned rock into gravel. This is clearly a guy you don't want to risk pissing off.
Now, he did what you said about the rock, so to not piss him off you still offer him a job, but try your best to foist him off somewhere else. As a matter of fact, you take it upon you to protect your crew from him by guiding him away at once. And once he's found his way you scoot. Both because he's still a strange fellow that breaks rocks with his bare hands and you don't know what makes him tick - and also because you're already three days behind on building and even if the rock is now gravel it still has to be moved out of the way, by your crew who are probably still just chatting around about what just happened..
 

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