Shuuenchi - Ch. 1 - Happy Land

[MangaDex]

 

[punpun]

vertical text is really bad readability wise, especially multiple lines of it. i recommend keeping it horizontal and adding a white stroke for when it goes out of bounds, like this https://i.gyazo.com/9d541b9e5586caa1f6246deb8f8bcca4.png
other than that gj
(also p27 is tiny res, dunno if that was intended or not)

 

[Synergyfenix]

@punpun that's true, I'll do that next time, thanks for the input. I got page 27 from a different source since they got the full one, probably that's why lol.
edit: I fixed the vertical texts

 

[Sakchai]

I agree with Punpun vertical text can be very hard to read, but everything else seemed really good. Keep up the good job, I can’t wait to the next chapter is done.

 

[boag]

oh look its a crappier version of pygmalion

 

[vanillacam]

this is so creepy i fvcking love it

 

[Velsy]

Based on a true story