Sweet X Trouble - Ch. 11 - What Kind of Rival Is This? (4)

[MangaDex]

 

[Nyklas]

Looks good so far, but i hope it wont get shit.
Thank you for translating.

 

[Amaterasu93]

Stupid. As delusional as the worst shoujo manga.

I expected something like this, but it is still terrible to have to read. If this had just left out the diary burning and the "then I just didn't treat her well enough" line it would have been readable. Because stories where love blooms despite the initial intentions are great. But the MC is too confident or too naive and it makes me gag. Going over the top without first showing the struggle that built it up makes it feel terribly fake.

I hope it gets better.

 

[monkey123]

lalalalal too pure to be true eh @Amaterasu93 ? ?

At least a beta with character progression. Can't find many of them among betas nowadays.

 

[mommy]

I was expecting this but not so fast and with a bit of drama before. I usually hate the prolonged stupid drama but now it's lacking!

 

[Grimson-Gurdian]

Still not satisfied! Put that twin tailed snotty bitch in a barrel and fill it with concrete.

 

[depzdai]

Only truly dank men who don't fear being cucked could say those lines.

 

[FrenzyMode]

Lol still love it thanks for the translation!

 

[DexHaunter]

Hmmm the part about "it's my fault for not treating her well" is what made all he said kinda bad. That really wasn't related to the point. It's not his fault if the girl that was only interested in using him stayed that way even if he treated her well, since she's uh, using him? Not seeing him as a person but as an object.
Also, keeping secrets in an intimate relationship is a good way to make the other feel like you don't trust them. So the MC doesn't care that she doesn't trust him? What stupidity is that.

 

[Chuggoth]

And he still needs his hulk gf to defend him, duh.
Side-step and slap that bitch, Rickert-style. That's all he needed to do after burning the diary, not some trite lecture on relationships.

 

[kronix]

if u guys dont like betas I got a list of isekai mangas full of MCs that have relationships like either full on sex, no virgin, married / fiancee / etc and even getting the girls pregnant

 

[Chuggoth]

@kronix that's beta wish-fulfillment.

 

[RhoninFire]

Bad initial intentions are bad. But it is also true that if feeling changes, then it does count for something.

Though I have to strongly agree "then I just didn't treat her well enough" is dumb. Actions can affect feelings, but you can't just nice your way to affecting it. Feelings doesn't work like that. And that wouldn't be his fault if it didn't.

 

[DaoLaw]

A genius among genius assassin from a century old family specialized in that and she can't even get free from some little rope bounding her frail girl's arm, neither the freaking literal scotch on her mouth...come on author !

 

[Tertium777]

the old man was right

 

[gallifreyan100]

I loved this chapter personally. I like that we don't have to deal with that hackneyed drama about learning how to get past the lies or whatever. We already have him trying to prove himself to her family. It does seem like she's done a bit too much so far if he's really just a tool. I love what he said too, that's exactly what I wanted him to say instead of the stupid, cliche 'oh wait, so she doesn't love me?' crap. I think it's cuter this way. I kinda like how he burned the diary even though there was a good chance Vicky would eventually lose her shit and try to kill him anyway. And I love what he said about 'not treating her well enough.' Can't explain it, I just do.