Taihou to Stamp - Vol. 5 Ch. 42 - Closing already?

[MangaDex]

 

[Mathew_01]

The wording is a bit....off this time. Usually great translation, but its like the proofreading got lax for this chapter.

 

[Ostermann]

@Mathew_01
The wording may be off for sure. Sometimes intentionally, but, once again, as English is my second language, I sometimes overcomplicate grammar. Can you show me an example of what seems off? Would be much appreciated.

 

[Kaiser92]

Holle shiet! The path to peace is to use your enemy ammo and equipment and make the other side do the same lmao

@Ostermann
Page 3 (182): There was a something shady...
Page 4: You've became so vicious shrewd/diabolical (maybe?)
Page 5: We've better to check on... -> We'd better check on...
Page 6: It's a Marshal you're talking with to
Page 7: Buy By the way
Page 13: It's better not to engage into a direct confrontation (or maybe: Direct engagement with a tank in this is not recommend)
This vehicle is heavy packed well-armed for its size.
Also is vertical assault means air assault cause I'd never heard that phrase before.
Not sure: Page 14: ... was planning an offence offense (english is my 2nd lang as well but I think ppl use offence for illegal act more than an attack)

 

[Ostermann]

@Kaiser92
Thanks. Some of these are just leftovers, apparently I indeed didn't pay enough attention to proofreading this time. Will recheck everything.
As for vertical assault and offence. I try to use older sounding terms (as well as the author) and British spelling to reflect the location and era.

 

[DjAlexDubCheck]

@Kaiser92 @Ostermann
It's You've become.
I reckon vicious to be an effective word, wouldn't change that.

 

[dreminh]

@Ostermann thank 4 update

 

[MoarChamps]

>Both sides sell duds to each other by the proxy of a sham neutral state
My sides are in LEO.

 

[sssr]

Wait, is Duran dead? That'd be a tragedy.

 

[Ostermann]

Fixed a bunch of typos, corrected some awkward phrasing. Thanks again @Kaiser92 and @DjAlexDubCheck. And thank all of you for caring about this manga and constant support!

@MoarChamps
Whenever I see the last page I remember this.

@sssr
Yeah, apparently so. Shame.

 

[Kaiser92]

@DjAlexDubCheck
Oh shit you're right.

@Ostermann
You're doing god work my friend, keep it up!

 

[Kaiser92]

@Ostermann
Is page 7 "Buy the way" an intentional pun?

 

[Ostermann]

@Kaiser92
Nah, it's a typo I overlooked.

 

[Irian]

Thanks for hilarious chapter!

 

[Beregorn]

@Kaiser92 @Ostermann offence and offense are the same word: the first uses the British spelling, the latter uses the American one. Here some references for other differences between the two
https://www.britishcouncilfoundation.id/en/english/articles/british-and-american-english

 

[Ostermann]

@Beregorn
Yeah, I know. Thanks anyway.
Eitherway, I changed it into 'offensive'.

 

[unk0damnation]

One of the funniest chapter so far. The surrealness of building Donzoko in previous two chapters was worth it.

 

[Monky]

The cutesy art and farcical story hides some real dark stuff here.
Very apt for capturing what war is I reckon.
Oh and top kek at everyone selling duds.

 

[MangaRockRefugee]

Jesus fuck the imperials don't fuck around
To gun civvies down like that...
This manga is ridiculously dark once the comedy mask slides off...

 

[Yanagi]

So the oracle was actually on point: raised to fame then lose everything