The Branded Swordswoman - Ch. 1

Interesting indeed, hopefully no forced romances because I like the fantasy setting and these two characters.

A bit heavy handed on the exposition though.
 
Neat all around so far.

@Exia1987 No sexual violance tag here and even on novel updates thankfully. Hopefully that wouldn't change. It would just serve as cheap shock value.
 
Looks great so far. Her versatility in using different weapons and tools at the same time makes it enjoyable to read.
 
Thank you for your hard work!

FYI: a pilgrim's journey is not a "pilgrim" — it's a PILGRIMAGE. Hope this helps!
 

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