The Kingdoms of Ruin - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Hellfire
- Thread starter MangaDex
- Start date
Invader_Retro
Group Leader
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2019
- Messages
- 3,037
The chapter was already done but had errors and by the time it was fixed another group uploaded 
Pfft, that was hilarious. You'd think these witches (or morons I should say) would be more defensive since they're getting hunted down like dogs for so long but apparently they'd rather hug it out in front of the enemy and be all lovey dovey for no reason. Caution? fuck that we're witches, not some smelly human. Talk about a plot written by a 2 year old, so cliche ugh.
Invader_Retro
Group Leader
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2019
- Messages
- 3,037
Invader_Retro
Group Leader
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2019
- Messages
- 3,037
Invader_Retro
Group Leader
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2019
- Messages
- 3,037
@hiimtummy few grammatical errors and sentences not making sense....
The wrong script was used in editing basically.
The wrong script was used in editing basically.
- Joined
- Dec 11, 2018
- Messages
- 117
@XL ehhh ? ehh ? did we read the same manga ???? I don't see where they hugging it out ??? ehh ? She killed those attacker , eh ? not being careful ? caution ? of course they are being careful, but what happen was unsuspected danger , hug it out ? lovey dovey ? what the seven hell are you talking about ?
- Joined
- Dec 11, 2018
- Messages
- 1,022
@Invader_Retro why did you upload this if somebody else uploaded this? Hopefully its not the dick measuring contest like whats going on with Gu master
Invader_Retro
Group Leader
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2019
- Messages
- 3,037
- Joined
- Dec 11, 2018
- Messages
- 1,022
@Invader_Retro ahh I see, my bad. Ty for translating stuff.
- Joined
- Dec 10, 2018
- Messages
- 5,369
More! More! More! More! More!
(kind of hard to believe that they'd let the MC live after they just killed his master and loved one in front of his eyes)
(kind of hard to believe that they'd let the MC live after they just killed his master and loved one in front of his eyes)
- Joined
- Dec 9, 2018
- Messages
- 79
I hope he kills all of them
@Invader_Retro Uh...just wanted to point it out but there's a minor error...
Pg 24, middle panel, left bubble, "Are the weak ones?" should be "Are we the weak ones?" Cause subject is unclear and doesn't follow from previous statement:
"We humans always had to read their expressions while begging for their help. Are the weak ones?"
And a grammar issue that stood out for me, on pg 32 and 33. For pg 32, bottom panel:
"You bastards are where Adonis comes from..."
Not sure if it should be "came from" instead of "comes from", past-tense vs present-tense.
Cause pg 33:
"If I destroy this place, he'll have nowhere to return. That's why I let you live."
Everything before the last sentence is in the present, but the last sentence makes the whole dialogue past tense. So...
"You bastards are where Adonis comes from...If I destroy this place, he'll have nowhere to return. That's why you're still alive."
or
"You bastards are where Adonis came from...If I destroyed this place, he'd have nowhere to return. That's why I let you live."
Pg 24, middle panel, left bubble, "Are the weak ones?" should be "Are we the weak ones?" Cause subject is unclear and doesn't follow from previous statement:
"We humans always had to read their expressions while begging for their help. Are the weak ones?"
And a grammar issue that stood out for me, on pg 32 and 33. For pg 32, bottom panel:
"You bastards are where Adonis comes from..."
Not sure if it should be "came from" instead of "comes from", past-tense vs present-tense.
Cause pg 33:
"If I destroy this place, he'll have nowhere to return. That's why I let you live."
Everything before the last sentence is in the present, but the last sentence makes the whole dialogue past tense. So...
"You bastards are where Adonis comes from...If I destroy this place, he'll have nowhere to return. That's why you're still alive."
or
"You bastards are where Adonis came from...If I destroyed this place, he'd have nowhere to return. That's why I let you live."
