The Unsuccessful yet Academically Unparalleled Sage ~A Cheating S-Rank Sorcerer's Post-Rebirth Adventurer Log~ - Vol. 2 Ch. 8.5

> training
don't
just don't
simply write "casting" instead for the love of go
 
> Question: What is the purpose of pull ring on Merlin's bewbs? (Page 2 panel 1)
If ever someone pulled that or it tangled to one hard objects, it will immediately pulled in any direction revealing her bewbs....

> I am more afraid the the bottom of Merlin will be imprint the most impression in this chapter rather than their magic skills.
 
learning -> casting, as it has been pointed out a few times.

That was really irritating. It's like seeing a car-chasing scene and the drivers belitter each other how they have 'build' their cars faster. "Training magic" is not totally out of the context, so when readers read this our brains go into overdrive to make sense out it, as we don't recognize it as a mistake immediately. That one was very annoying.
 
Cool fight bro but it's so unnecessary that I'm tempted to eye roll my way through it.
 

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