Tousled Melancholy - [ONESHOT]

Heyyyy she went for the kisss!!!! YAYYYYY that was really cute.
Idk if blonde suits her but whatever if they're happy XP
She doesn't look adult at all... I even thought it was the owner's daughter who was just learning.
Thanks for the sweet story and MERRY XMAS!!!
 
A cute one-shot and it's nice to see that progress was made at the end between them instead of leaving it open
 
Even in original stories their characters just look like yuyushiki characters.
 
Her hair was getting progressively worse every time it changed.

She looked the best at the very beginning...

Terrible hairdresser, 2/10.
 
Awful hair styles, especially the bleach.

Overall nice oneshot though, thanks 0mniessence.
 
pg 11, "I know regularly get" -> "I now regularly get"

pg 25, "they hairstyle" -> "the hairstyle"
 
I have concerns on how they fell for each other.
What would have been nice is a time frame to work with, because I'm a bit bad at judging things like this.
Was nice I guess though?
 
Glad I stumbled over this again! It’s just so cute and pure and cute and cute haha
 

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