Wizard's Martial World - Ch. 16

@SilverbladeUY the Pacing is really bad tho... wo is that guy? he was in like 3 Pages of the last chapter and now they are best Friends? It just feels like there is a lot missing...
 
the pacing is all over the place. Th mc visited 2 places and casually always meet murim guys. This is becoming ridiculous like MArvel's NYC where there are more ppl wih superpowers than citizens.
 
The pacing really does have an issue but it just feels like an old wizard having fun with his new life.
 
wtf just happened? it was paced fine at the start but suddenly our mc has a sworn brother and some shit's going down?
 
The "formation" is to run in circles around them until they get dizzy?
 
Not going to lie, they had me in the first half.

Right up to page 13 I was like this bromance is turning into some love at first sight Romeo and Juliet stuff, oh wait no, someone's here to kill them.
 
what... now he has a brother.. when he just got a sister?!
Is this how you find new family members..
 

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