Quite a few spelling errors, but if this is your first time trying to translate I think you're doing ok if english isn't your first language.
Maybe you should get a spell-checker at least if you are sure about your translations.
Not sure if the other groups who were translating dropped this tho. But at least you're trying :)
Ok i'll unfollow if this goes the way of Skeleton soldier. No offense but this was borderline unreadable. If you want a proofreader I can do that (i'm serious, DM me), but please dont put things this almost offensively translated.
Did the last group drop this?
There are a few spelling errors and general grammar issues and the typesetting looks a bit messy but overall really good, I probably couldn't even do anything close. Maybe a proofreader before would be good before the release
@NamelessGent here, nice and warm
https://youtu.be/J4LG73s-OLw?t=28
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tkOsgXHUGs0
Pity I couldn't find the one with the kid just going to town on that bovine pussy and then looking at the camera with the biggest shit eating grin I have ever seen