Yuugai Shitei Doukyuusei - Vol. 1 Ch. 11 - Miyakonojou-san Does It by Herself

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I enjoy that Miyako is getting to the point where she isn't as willing to put up with some of her neighbor's behavior like she was before and I also like that Miyakonojou is being far less subtle with her feelings regarding Miyako then she was before which shows how much she's recovered from the trauma she suffered during the birthday chapter.
 
At first I didn't think she'd comment on being choked but she did not disappoint. We stan Miyakonojou-san in this house.
 
That "I won't ever come to that" misunderstanding was gold. Translator of this doesn't get nearly enough credit. Every chapter filled with puns and inuendo. If not for the site we're on, you wouldn't know we're reading a translation.
 
This translation’s so good it feels like the dialogue was made in english in the first place. I wonder what was the original joke for the Mmm oral thing.
 
I would look at people not masturbating more strange than people who do. My first question would be why not? What's wrong? 🤔
 
i cant believe this comment section allowed the author to get away with that cover page and this chapter without mentioning Nina and her desk.

shame on you all
 
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Week late responding to this but I don't keep up with stuff as good as I should.

The original pun is on the words 品行 (hinkou), which means moral, and 淫行 (inkou) which means obscene. So it went

品行 -> HINKOU -> H 淫行 (ecchi inkou, ie ecchi obscenity)

In retrospect I actually don't really love my decision to localize the joke to "Mmm, oral." Since the topic is about masturbation, bringing up oral into it kind of reads like a non sequitur (and then the next chapter they actually talk about oral and Miyako knowing about it even though I made her act like she knows what it is without Reika commenting already here). It's not great.
I don't know how else I'd translate it though which is why I've kept it.
(though, fun fact: "throat" is also "inkou," so Miyakonojou could have turned turn "hinkou" into "h throat" instead. she didn't, so it's irrelevant to the chapter and the translation, but still, imagine if she had)
 

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