Recent content by Indigo9

The colour on the eyes only is a really nice touch, I like it

@Aura_Bella_Fiora So not running after the latest hype makes you dumb? I'd say the opposite is true... I like her :3

This is a mess. Several flashbacks of different length without clear boundaries already made the start bumpy but now there are 2 Chapters of individual backstory in a weird/unnatural narative. The FL has not spoken a single word in present time which makes her seem daft (I mean seriously even if...

@aereist Yeah but shouldn't the wound look different then? With how it is drawn I would say it's a cut, and "Slashing resistance" doesn't really clarify if it has to be caused by a blade or not, right?

Original Princess: "I would rather die as a villainess than a lunatic" FL: becomes more lunatic each day

That nailclip-thingy-sketch though... It's hurting my eyes how obviously wrong it is😫 That's not how it works😭 The screw has to go all the way through in order for the top bit to function as a lever (and the to bit has to be bent). And girl, do you seriously think no one would take advantage of...

The explanation of rules really sucks... it would be more than difficult to learn it based on what she is saying... Also why not just use wood for the pieces? I mean, the chess pieces are probably carved from that as well so it should be easy to think of. Personally I think cork would be too...

Okay... I thought the appraisal was meant to SEE the movement (maybe even in slowmotion) not slow down time all together. But even if that were the effect of it... Y'know, he wouldn't need the gremlins speed, or magic, or strength anymore... This is just not properly thought through *sigh*

So... the start is a flashback? To the time he was killed by the knight-captain? Also why panicking over the countess' death, just die within 24h and you'll be fine

He has a CUT on his cheek... wasn't he supposed to be slash-resistant?

The rubble "trapping" his foot is way too small... like seriously, I could lift pieces like that with ease, nevermind a KNIGHT COMMANDER. It would make more sense if his leg was actually crushed underneath a boulder... also why would he wish for it to be crushed, that doesn't make freeing it...

Yeah that's why you'd hide and run... definitely makes you less suspicious 🙄

Wouldn't it be faster to find out which wood all the stuff in the library is? Rather than speculating on the connection to the lover...

Thx a lot... I get the distinct feeling the archduke will use that marking to follow her and stumble upon her bathing🤣 This is gonna be so good

I somehow associate that Duke's daughter with america... 'cause her hair ornament looks like the spiky crown of Lady Liberty😅