Recent content by knismaps

@Kafka Last bubble, "bless" should be "blessed."

@slime_sleeper Last bubble should be "how did this happen" and not "happened."

@dogeroi Image 2, "using points is one of made up rules" should be like "using points is a made up rule" or "using points is one of her made up rules." "Exchande" should be "exchange." Image 6, "self distruct" should be "self-destruct."

@SxThx Image 3, "whether we succeed or fail, this is the moment our kingdom" is missing at least one word. Later on, if "in the name of his greatest" is referring to the king, I don't think that's clear. And as another user commented below, there seems to be missing content near the beginning...

@NotEnoughCoffee Image 6, "tere" should be "there."

@Kakfa Image 2, "tryant" should be "tyrant." "Get's" should be "gets."

@Mirazu Image 20, "I never saw that city before" is poor English, but that bubble should be something like "I've never passed through that city before, maybe I'll go." Images 15 and 19 also have errors as others have already pointed out in the comments.

@slime_sleeper "I'll send you back" should be like "I'll walk you home" (or "take").

@slime_sleeper "If your feeling doesn't change" would sound more natural as "if your feelings for me don't change."

@slime_sleeper 俺が生きる理由になるから seems like it should be "I'll be your reason for living." "Lit up" should be "light up."

@dogeroi Image 1, "I'm sick of preparing for culture festival" should be "the culture festival" (and "cultural" is more common).

@dogeroi As others mentioned, there's a ton of issues with this one. Image 1, "we've been dating since..." should probably be "you've been dating since..." Right after, "High School" is capitalized when it shouldn't be. "I shook the moment we made eye contact" should probably be "trembled"...

@Official229 Image 3, "distil" should be "distill" (well, one L is fine for British spelling, but elsewhere you use American). Image 10, "visitting" should be "visiting." Image 16, "burried" should be "buried."

@whosaint Image 28, "the current me serve as" should be "serves."

@BarakRhys Image 3, "elixers" should be "exilirs."