Okay, that was just kinda...yeeeeeaaaaaahhhhh if it serializes, good for the author, but I'll probably not pick it up at that point.
Also @MoonlightwolfchanX is your profile pic a fan color or official? Because it looks like you capped it off of a streaming site.
@211ritsuki
Oh please. I'm happy to help in my spare time as it's good practice and it's actually kinda fun for me. No need to pay me, though if it ever gets to the point where I make this into a proper job (as in it's my legitimate profession), then it would be done under a sort of...
@211ristuki
You. Are. A. GOD! You fixed everything I mentioned. It's awesome that you are someone who is both able and WILLING to do the work to make a great product! And you're right about "the stuff in the margin." I just like to see the original styling of the pages on most works (though...
@211ritsuki These are the things I noticed when I went through and these are the corrections I would recommend (Pages are of the manga itself, not counting credit/notes pages) (also, sorry in advance for the supermassive-text-wall-off-doom):
That's it! Holy hell that's a lot more than I...
@211ritsuki It wouldn't be a trouble at all. I would honestly be incredibly happy to make it better, and we can use it to help you get better too. That way you just do better work in general on future projects. Although, if you really need to know where the problems are, I'll leave a comment on...
@211ritsuki Since you're doing this alone, if you need a proofreader, I'm all for helping you out. I did notice a few minor grammatical errors. Not enough to ruin it, but definitely enough to be noticed and counted ( I spotted 3 or 4). I'd love to help with the little bit of clean up and make...
Krypton
(Need a regulations check on non-English and meme responses in regards to the previous two. Might need another restart, in which case: Oof that was short lived.)
Nobody:
Absolutely no sane person on the planet:
Me: Yeah, this is really just "Isekai no Atsumare Dobutsu no Mori" ("Animal Crossing New Horizons in Another World" when localized to English) isn't it...
Tell me I'm wrong.
(Also, FUCK Google Translate and any other site I tried to use while...
@Scrabbleman @AnonymousWeeaboo I agree that the author definitely should have given more time to build up characters, but with the axing, I'm also not surprised with this result. Might drop it now, will probably read to the end for the hell of it.
@AnonymousWeeaboo I'm just watching the fights like its a Fast and Furious movie: Like a brain-dead zombie looking at the pretty monochrome.
Also half paying attention to the character's lines because I can at least imagine that there's some substance to it.
Cover makes me think of Isekai Nonbiri Nouka (AKA Farming Isekai) which is currently being translated by LHT. I thought it would be a bit of a rip-off because of how close the themes seem to be based on the description, but I already feels like it's gonna be very different if the first chapter...