@Charzard4261
for page 11, from what I understand;
rough translation
"Recently, Her Highness is becoming like a cool breeze"
I think what he want to say is you're like a breeze that sends chills
Translation seems fine(though I haven't seen the raw yet)
But can't you use any other image editor like photoshop or gimp, or edit it in your phone using ibispaint
Ah geez, I'm actually trying to translate this it's been 4 days now, the redraw is what taking me so long, still at page 8.
well I guess I have to drop this, since there's already a release.
@MegaPiggy
Page 10, last panel
Eh...
Ehh...
For the Dark Goddess to be revived at times like this, please give me a break...
page 24, 2nd panel
Gillmen and I(Dark Eye) clans are both dark races...
If I were to help Makoto-sama here, it'll create a conflict on both clans...
@art17
@vhr2121 @Bloddrake
your eyes are not keen enough to see huh
-shadow of calbis hair is no good
-books were not align
-shadow in the ground is weird
-the dark area at kyousai is just a guess, and if you zoom it it's actually a mess
-the tattoo of calbis has been erased
-her left wing is i...
chapter 28 is already out a few days ago, this one needs redrawing, but i dunno how to draw, i'm really bad at it. I like arts but the arts just don't like me lol
@F20K
please use this, just correct the grammars and etc
Here's my translation
This still needs a proofreading, as i am not a native english and also not that good enough in japanese
Chapter 26
Chapter 27.1
Chapter 27.2
Here's my translation
This still needs a proofreading, as i am not a native english and also not that good enough in japanese
Chapter 26
Chapter 27.1
Chapter 27.2
Here's my translation
This still needs a proofreading, as i am not a native english and also not that good enough in japanese, but atleast i have a bit knowledge of it, probably jplt n5
Chapter 26
@F20K
Page 3
panel 2
I just tried to imitate it = I just tried to imitate it, and it happened
panel 3
It wasn't that easy though
panel 4
What do you mean by that?
What I mean is... when a strong magic field collide with each other...
Page 6
panel 1
You're releasing too much darkness'...
@F20K
Page 10
panel 2
"That man master..." = "That man... is her master..."
panel 4
"Looks like some kind of struggle" = "There seems to be a bloodbath here"
Page 11
panel 2
"That's it" = "That's right"
panel 3
"It's strange'" = "That's strange..."
"It sounds different from the name...
starting from ch15, the translation is mtl, and didn't bother to check the flow of conversation.
actually the conversations of this manga aren't that hard to translate.
here's my rough translation to ch15
Chapter 15
Chapter 16