@DrWhoCares Thank you for taking your time in pointing all these out. I'll start working on a new chapter very soon and hopefully will be able to heed your advice.
@Kuraiaku I don't know about the previous scanlation group but this chapter was done as a personal project and has no connection with any previous scanlations whatsoever. Furthermore, I think what @KobeisGOAT is trying to refer to is drama in the manga.
@Theteresu Thanks for the save, but I've really gotta improve my translation. Simply put, I'm not a native Japanese speaker and I don't know Portuguese all too well, hence the translation quality largely depends on my English skills.
@DrWhoCares I appreciate the feedback. I'm totally doing the...