Fechippuru - Bokura no Innocent Love - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - The Maiden is Delicious

[friedtofu]

I don't typeset, but I'm an experienced proofreader. If you'd like some assistance for the low low cost of free.99 hit me up. I'd love to work on this series!

 

[HEXyren]

@friedtofu Thanks. I'll PM you if I need any help.

 

[Shamz]

weird how they r just starting to question about "what about my whole being" but i guess this is the start of the plot to getting closer than just fetish lovers...

 

[DrWhoCares]

@HEXyren you should take @friedtofu up on his offer.
Since English is not your native language, you should always have a native English speaker to proofread for you. Although that won't help you with translation mistakes, or the loss of information from going from Japanese to Portuguese to English.

 

[HEXyren]

@DrWhoCares English is not my native language but it's the language I have the most grasp in. I've carried out my studies up until now in English.

 

[DrWhoCares]

@HEXyren That's great dude, and more power to you, but based off your releases, you're not even fluent.
Get a proofreader.

 

[gosling11]

I can't understand the dialogue in page 10 at all. Someone please?

 

[leechXlurk]

Can anyone tell me what's happening on pg. 10? I don't get it at all.

 

[ngkn92]

I have no idea what page 10 is about too.

 

[Kuriisu]

Basically what happened in page 10 is a dicussion about how they will meet for the date. Usually, two people would come from their own houses, and meet to go on a date. However, since they both live together, it's not the same and he wants to replicate the feeling of encountering each other at a meeting spot.

 

[Samishii23]

Ouch the script quality dropped this chapter.

 

[nobodygattaknow]

 

[Aruthuro]

gggggggggggggggggggggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

 

[Otamega04]

THAT WAS FAST

 

[Cain_art]

Damn, that was barely English or was it just me?

 

[DaNinja]

i think we all know where's this going

 

[sawuwu]

@Cain_art yeah, the translation quality suddenly went out the window

 

[th3me]

besides fetishes this is sometimes cute

 

[nicklablue]

Translation's a bit iffy for this chapter

 

[goodlort]

jesus this TL went downhill quick