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"my" instead of "mine"
it's more common to say "my" i believe.
unless it's the wolf. if the wolf is the type to say stuff like "thou","art" etc. then keep it.
if it's the guy, consider changing "mine" to "my"
this does not at all seem like effort (well that's probably what the story's gonna explain later into the plot i think), but it would make sense if he had an ability to learn skills quickly, since the previous skill he tried to learn was over in about one (or more) sessions. idk though, i would...
@firosahoge @tkmisere well if the story is gonna be good, then he's probably gonna stick to the sword, except that there are much more overpowered sword skills that can easily beat magic skills when it comes to it
@leadrous
There wasn't as much as last time (there were probably a lot of places you could've put a comma but here are the ones that kinda stood out):
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top right panel: "The 'Chosen People Ideology' that denies couse 2 students this privilege of becoming a student council officer is...