I got curious about the plot so I went to read the wn... How can I say this, the narrative is infuriating.
Something about how the author writes the (constant) misunderstandings and the (constant) foreshadowing instead of continuing with the story irked me in a way that made me stop reading out...
Oh the irony, the emperor agonizing over two choices for the throne while there's this treasure of a ruler right in front of him. I hope he at least realize that after that well-deserved curbing.
@Ovdose now that would be a really nice twist. The mc is (in general) kind and affectuate to good people and people that suffer from loss but cruel and merciless to evil and scummy people. And there is that "aura perception" detail too.
It's all there, the author just needs to avoid needless...
You know, she should just have deescalated the situation by just looking at the douche junior n°2 with disgust and getting away.
The last part was just a waste of time for her as she can't do nothing beyond snarking remarks with hopes they'll leave her alone. Welp, that ended in bitter tone.
Oh, why do you think, you doorknob? Maybe because the book plot will explode right in your face for solving one of the main key points?
Seriously, the author purposely made this girl dumb for unnecessary drama. Any decent fictional character that supposedly have knowledge of future issues and...
This mc feels unnatural. Or supernatural. I mean, the way he behaves is like of a wraith or some kind of entity of retribution.
Not the best character writing I've seen but the vibe is intriguing.
Dear lord, what's wrong with the story flow of this one? There's no build up at all and the new plot introductions feel really cheap.
The visuals seem more like an unfinished/unpolished work than an actual chapter release, there's at least one goofy and out of place facial expression per...