@lightingcloud The English word "style" in Japanese is usually used to refer to one's figure, so yeah.
I think it'd read a lot more clearer if people would not try to keep "style" all the time just because it's in katakana.
I think there's plenty of potential for plots yet even with development. She'll still be a misunderstood lovestruck banchou and he'll still be a spineless pushover.
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