I just noticed. When she's in the carriage, the artist keeps forgetting whether she's seated on the left or right side. Some panels she's on the right, others she's on the left. And in others, she's seated in the middle and the carriage has gotten a lot wider.
What the fuck is this chapter.
35 chapters of light fantasy, then BAM CREATION MYTH OUT OF NOWHERE and GLOWY DUDE WITH POWERS also her husband IS A DEMIGOD
@AgentKuga
No no no, the tooth is another sign of growing. She's allowed to ride the train unsupervised for the first time, and then she suddenly loses a tooth.
Next issue is going to be a 20 year timeskip showing her as an adult riding the train to work, then end credits.
@reika because it's trapped in the game manga, but also the game is realistically shit.
Most trapped in the game mangas are excuses for authors/readers to jerk off dreaming of future video games. This one is like "No, it's a video game from today. He's just transported into it for no reason."
Fun fact humans are one of the species that can't say "If your head can get through, your body can get through".
Our skeletal structure is not flexible enough in most cases. Contortionists excepted. We tend to get stuck around the torso area.
That statement applies to Rats and Cats, among others.
I decided to do some math. Assuming they are referring to DIETARY Calories in the first place and not thermal lower-case-c calories, which makes sense since they are referring to human being burning calories and not a fucking car.
After playing with wolfram alpha and inputting ((384.6 *10^24...
Got 4 chapters in before I got sick of it.
The main character is entirely unlikable, resorting to fuckin' mind games and screaming arguments rather than having an honest conversation.
The art is also super fuckin' weird. Especially the main characters face, it seems to go off-model every panel.
Well, the English & typesetting was good, even made some effort in cleaning the raws or getting pre-cleaned raws (I saw that on the first panel on page 6). Can't speak to the translation myself, though.
Overall, very good work, unless someone comes in and says this was the chapter that changed...