@sonic
Thanks for the chapter,
the following look odd:
Once the harvest and trading finish.... -> Once the harvest and trading finished.....
The construction was progressed rapidly with the minotaurs helping --> The construction was progressing rapidly with the minotuars helping.
and that...
@TSP
Thanks for posting the chapter.
You have a synonym issue on page 3
I couldn't bare so many dying like that -> I couldn't bear so many dying like that.
The use of bear in this case is verb endure.
@ScarecrowB
Pg 28, "say" has given you trouble:
We don't have a saying in it ---> We don't have a say in it.
and
Don't says such unreasonable things. --> Don't say such unreasonable things
@ScarecrowB
Pg 4 has a super awkward sentence
"My parents too went to...."
Try this instead
"My parents went to live in the city too, so it's just been me and grandma all this time"
also, please ditch the all caps font.
Re: motorcycle
She's on the big island of HI, the Triumph is a rental.
Although I agree that the Z is probably dead.
Great book and thanks to Squiggles for doing it.
@squigglesjp
On pg 7 when she's talking about the engine, Im sure "the cogs are not loose either" was an accurate translation. However no motorcyclist who works on their own bike would ever say that. They would say "The cams look fine too" or something similar. I chalk it up to the mangaka...
@tshh
Thanks for the chapter
Some suggestions
pg 5
"How comes.. " -> "How come.."
Strenght -> strength
"Gives them such a freedom of agency" -> "Gives them such freedom of agency" and really you could drop the "of agency" part and it would be fine.
pg 7
"That I challenged her for fight...