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[MangaDex]

 

[dextersTomato]

Crossi was beautiful in the poster. I didnt expected it coz she was tomboyish in the school

 

[dextersTomato]

This is my guess, Vaine really likes Crossi, but, he knows Crossi was a man.
He cannot tap a trap, even though a trap makes your heart went a heart beat.
Now, a trap is a real woman after all. No need to hesitate, go for Crossi and meet her.

Vaine would like to continue stretching exercise they do always in the room of Kururi.
Vaine has no idea he always accidentally touch the off limit parts of Crossi because he knows she is a he that time.
Now that he know he is a she, then, just continue... Hahahaha

 

[misinformed]

Crossi the crossdresser. Should have known.

 

[Someone_called_A]

Thanks for picking this up!

 

[AlphaFlow]

Oof, the translations pretty rough grammatically, but somehow still understandable. Still, thanks for picking this up.

 

[WiseDominykas]

I hope your time was worth it.

 

[bezerker0z]

curious how it was placed near chapter 17, but ok, im down

 

[stretch22]

Been far too long since I last read this. Got no idea what's happening anymore

 

[JoeyKicks]

Could've used a proof reader.

And let me get this straight, Your group is a one man group with a single release and you are looking for a redrawer, translator, cleaner, etc, etc.............
Couldn't you just join a pre-existing group

 

[wouw]

POGGGGG

 

[Marz666]

And it's gone...

 

[Lord_Farquaad]

thanks for covering for my lazy ass lmao
my bad for dropping it guys

 

[Nixolas_Zinn]

..... Just join another group, you'll get more help that way, and I won't have to trudge through the mud to read this

 

[monkey123]

So the trap wasn't a trap, but actually a reverse trap?

@dextersTomato
Will Vayne's D fit in? Find out next time!

 

[HOOfan_1]

The grammar wasn't bad...but the dialog barely made sense

 

[Yamadipati]

I uh, honestly forgot what this was about lol

 

[Allexio]

I... tried to understand this but...
yeah...

 

[elfalas]

Wait, there were people that didn't realize she was definitely a girl after that chapter 4?

 

[Evasdian]

PR-wise, I don't much to say 'cuz I'm not involved, but there are a couple of grammar mistakes and awkwardly formed sentences.
TS-wise, it's just painful for the eyes. The leading, the kerning, the size, and the formatting are all messy.
I tried to talk to you guys via Discord Group, but I was kicked before I even explained my intention and what you can do to fix it up. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯