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[krispy]

You say eagle eye and then change it to hawk eye

 

[Hakilah]

keep it up, its good translate, and thx for translating.

 

[dope0420]

You did just fine! Thanks for your work!

 

[Vcxz]

Liked said before idk if you noticed but you changed eagle eye then in later pages you put hawk eye.! Other than that nothing really major. Keep it up and thank you for the translation.

 

[Lidius]

bro reading this was painful where can i find other translation groups

 

[4V29LN0n]

Trash isekai deserves trash translation.

 

[ponpoing]

@4V29LN0n But we like this trash! It's the number one reason why we keep on coming back again and again

 

[pilafrice0]

Since you said you wanted opinions for improvement, I read from somewhere that the best way to arrange words in speech bubbles is to base the shape of it on the longest word in the sentence. I think you did well on that except for the lower right bubble on the 16th page. You could probably arrange it in a way that doesn't make it look like a paragraph. As for the sentences themselves, it's probably best if you took a break to refresh your mind and reviewed them afterwards to see if it turned out well or if they sound natural to you. Hope you do much better on your next attempt :)

 

[SardonicJester]

Gorgeous

 

[Ripperpebble]

Thx for translating

 

[Yamikzune]

yay
thanks

 

[dextersTomato]

DFQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its norn episode now, that thicc thigh....

 

[Feriafansomega]

Rape time