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That took a quick 180 last chapter and now another 180.
This is kinda going to and fro and I like it!
 
Being beaten to death means that you were beaten until you died. If you're still alive, that expression is incorrect.

Also, "there's nothing other than you"....?
"If you live in such a nice house, your wife must be at least 3 or four".....?

Guys, get a proofreader. Or read the sentences out loud first.
 
WHY IS THE FEMALE LEAD SO FRICKIN WEAK MAN???!!! LIKE BRUH WHY DIDNT SHE AT LEAST ASK HIM IF HE HAD A WIFE BEFORE THEY SLEPT TOGETHER?! NOW SHES CRYING AND TALKING ABOUT BECOMING A LOWLY SERVANT LIKE MISS GURL STFU AND AVENGE YOUR MOTHER LIKE YOU WERE TOLD TO DO.
 
Im not gonna get mad at her for being weak, she has a past trauma and was never taught to or allowed to be strong but,,,,, how tf is she gonna be a queen if she doesn't even know what that means 🤔 kinda worried for her
 

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