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[MangaDex]

 

[henman]

This was fairly harder to read compared to starscream's version, due to several reasons.

 

[Xan09]

@henman do you mind sharing? I see they use a lot more fonts but other than that is there anything you could add? I'm looking to get better. ^_^

 

[henman]

@Xan09 strange font at the start of first page, I'm not sure it was needed to pick such weird one; in many bubbles text is too close or even touches the borders, which makes it hard to read; text on the phone screen, on the contrary, too small and impossible to read with "fit height" setting on my screen, plus, you put one of messages over the girls finger; vertical text on two last pages is unreadable. In general it's rare case when vertical text looks okay, and one has to choose good fonts for it and all, but I think starcream managed better with last page. Still, vertical text better be avoided.
Also, after putting your and his scans side by side aligned with same height, I noticed your scans are more blurred, especially in the first half. That's strange, if you have bigger dimension, you should have better image quality.

 

[Xan09]

@henman hmmm good to know. I'll see how my source for the RAWs is getting them uploaded. And all font work is noted, he's got really good choices. Thanks

 

[hanchobakery]

@Xan09
Hey, I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure her usage of the term ピッピ is actually in reference to 彼ピッピ which is just like a slang way of saying boyfriend.
So in this chapter, she's not referring to him by a name of Pippi, but rather she's saying that she'd do anything for her man.
And then in chapter 2, she's not saying that Pippi was annoying, but the idea of having a boyfriend is annoying.
Though I mean, maybe I am just horribly wrong.

 

[Xan09]

@hanchobakery you're definitely right, I've been thinking about it since I uploaded and couldn't quite place where I'd heard it before. Thanks for reminding me, I'll keep that in mind if I get to Chapter 4 tyty

 

[Xan09]

for anyone else that reads this I just found that my RAW uploader and my typesetter used file sharing services that compressed the image quality. I'm so sorry that this ruined the quality for you guys.

 

[DrivZone]

Thanks a lot for uploading! Really appreciate the work and it was very good don't worry!

Also, man do I hate when your partner pull up those "shit tests" or ask some stupid questions like "what do you love about me? ". The guy was also annoying af with his over protective and suffocating attitude.

 

[vcnomnom]

oof that last page i almost can't really read it