15 Minutes 'Til They Actually Start Dating - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - 15 Minutes Before We Seriously Go Out

Don't know the raw, But the old one's dialog seem make more sense.
 
That beginning was like a jump scare 😖 I was seriously thinking "woah wtf we really gonna start like this" but it ended up being cute at the end 😍
 
I think this dialogue makes more sense to me.

For the comparison the old one was like:
B: So, are we going out?
G: Well, why not? (Basically yes, sure)
B: Do you wanna start dating?
G: Yes.
That was like repeating the same thing.

Meanwhile, the new one here:
B: So, shall we go out?
G: Don't so me. (Not answering)
B: Shall we go out, then?
G: Sure.
The conversation is flowing, thus much better.
 
for a sec i thought this was going to be like when chiaki in tsurezure children said 'we were going out?'

if u catch my drift
 

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