"You keep adding new characters.
Do you revise the dialogue when necessary?
You stuff too much into it so in the end, you can't tell what the focus is."
Seems like this is a manga about Subaro Uta
Funny how Koyuki called Kaede a slut even though she's 'slutting' her way up the food chain. I don't know what kind of person I hate the most, girls that do this or guys that fall for it.