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Bonus comments form E-Domino during the posting of sucker chapter 1

Cover/page 1: Cover page for chapter 1 of my doujin.
Learned some new things about photoshop while working on this.

Page 2: Alas, chapter 1 shall be a bit boring, for how closely it follows the game's intro. Gotta introduce the characters and main conflicts, after all.

Page 3: Alas for Dolphi and Wadanohara to have such similar colors for their text bubbles. Though Dolphi's is slightly bluer...

Page 4: Our heroine appears, accompanied by flowers, for some reason...

Page 5: Something Pitchy withers this way...

Page 6: Alright, this is a page I was excited about getting to! Not the least because I think it's humorous. I think this page really helps to hammer in the idea that this doujin will be following Fukami's perspective. Though we'll still have to wait for page 14 for events to start to differ from the game...

Page 7: Woo, already halfway through chapter 1! :0! I am excite for chapter 2

Page 8: Everybody's favorite shark, strolling up onto the scene...

Page 9: Sheesh, everyone's so dang sassy, smh...

Page 10: This week in Sucker, Memoca gets owned.

Page: 11: It's amazing how these things escalate.

Page 12: Could at least be grateful, Mr. Too-Cool-For-School-Shark. :/

Page 13: Ta-da! And with that, we draw a curtain on chapter 1. UoU
 

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