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[MangaDex]

 

[Karoshi]

If I had to say anything, it'd be that I'm saddened by the obvious lack of proofreading.

 

[GodGinrai]

Glad to see a new chapter. I'm not sure why we haven't seen any chapters from the previous scanlators... :\

Couple of notes:

1) You need a proofreader. There was a lot of stiff or otherwise weird language in there.
2) You might also run your translations through spell check. It's called "business", not "bussines". (I saw this twice)
3) Please translate all of it. There are at least 3 places I noted the original Japanese text was just left in. It was ok where they were just saying something like "Ah", but it was really frustrating when she went into a deeper explanation about something and you just left the whole box of Japanese text there with no translation.

 

[Yukiechi]

Why does this "translation" even exist....?

 

[blackyawgdom]

My eyes burn....?

 

[Bramia]

People commenting here are harsh... I'm glad you took your time to translate and upload this... But I'm not glad I tried reading it o_o

 

[Lasoren]

You need a PF, QC, and community to support you

 

[kaminomikan]

i forgot this one existed

 

[Rinka]

Absolutely disgusting.

 

[RecycledCabbage]

Thanks for taking time and effort to translate this. I'm grateful someone made me remember I'm reading this.

 

[Hounder]

Yea, I gotta glance at it and unfortunately, the translation really is in need of a lot of work. I am guessing English is not your original language, so I can get how it can look like it does. Definitely get someone who has a strong understanding of English to work with you on this, it will help tremendously.

 

[Wolvenworks]

@Bramia the fella should be glad that we care enough to criticize him. you won't get this kinda bonus IRL ya know. that said, it was bad from page one...have to agree with @Hounder that the guys doesn't seem to have a fluent grasp on english, and that he should get soemone better than "I R baboon"

 

[Ryou]

What is capitalization?

 

[Tyme]

wae

 

[tekno]

Well, thanks for trying anyway
I think you might have been better off just directly google translating it, because the typesetting isn't too bad, and I could probably read a google translate somewhat smoothly

 

[DrWhoCares]

Someone got the raws for this?
PM me. Let's fix this shit.

 

[AbuHajaar]

Good sir, may I introduce you to this wonderful feature called the Shift key?

 

[Hanen]

don't bother. Breaking all the rules of editing and finalization... UNLESS... the intent was community editing. To the poor guy that tried, don't give up!

 

[Confused]

If you're going to try scanlating, then at least read even a single page of a scanlated manga to see how it looks like, ex: font. This scanlation didn't even try to translate everything.

 

[Legion]

I'm just glad it got translated. Thanks! I patiently wait for more.