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I think if future chapters keep up with being educational with more literature and writing techniques trivias like with the "they says" part, it could turn into a gem.
 
I like how he attributes the original story to his "chuunibyou period", yet his current corrections are still chuunibyou in nature.
 
@UltimateAdrian20 For real its overdone and lazy. I feel theres allot of potential in isekai, if just a bit more effort was put into the front end allot of these stories would be better.

But then again you dont see me making one so who am I to complain
 

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