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The diction in the dialogue is very stilted, and sounds unnatural for the characters. Please proofread more.
 
Am i missing something? Why there is a loli dragon? What strategy meeting 2 weeks ago? Why these isn't in the previous chapter?
 
Incomplete chapter. On marmaru chapter 3 is in 3 parts.

http://wasabisyrup.com/archives/FNkrGSMOX18
http://wasabisyrup.com/archives/AOxMj5up9rQ
http://wasabisyrup.com/archives/3zdQ4L-eRNk

and this is part 3
 
There was a missing chapter where Luxy found the raws.

We will try to release it the faster we can, sorry about that.
 

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