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> Spoils a "future" twist in the title
> Doesn't actually show the already-spoiled twist in the first chapter
> Chapters separated by "parts"
> Overall edgy MC with edgy story premise

More fucking fantasy trash

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ahh i saw the raw from this and i was extreme angry .. thank you for your hard work
 
This is legitimately the most trashy wish-fulfillment isekai edgelord story I've ever seen
Another one into the reading list
 
Hot damn this is top tier garbage. Is this an out of season april fools joke?
 
This is horrible, they spoiler it with the title, but then gave us an incomplete chapter, the author is fooling around too much with his own work.

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@ThunderaMaou
I agree, with that kind of title everything should of been put on the table in this first chapter. Splitting the chapter up just feels extra wrong in this case.
 
Can someone link the raws or the novel or at least give us spoilers?
 
@Luca44 https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-mightiest-hero-of-black-my-party-members-betrayed-me-so-ill-stick-with-the-strongest-monster/
 
I said this on another recent release, but, aren't you supposed to try and hook your reader with the first chapter? :thinking:
 

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