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Hello! This is LyallKins from The Afternoon Teashop! We wished to inform that:

Firstly, that this is our first time Translating and we would like to thank Wicked House for their guidance and support!
yet! Most Importantly, we wish to thank the readers for having to bear with our (not so good) translation.

Secondly, if we have sniped any group we wished to inform that it was not in our intention to do so. We've spoken with @tentennyo and asked for his permission although being new we do not know much on this front.

Lastly, Thank you for your support and understanding, if there is anything you would like to see us do better in the future- please don't hesitate!

Once again, Thank you!
 
SOOOOO, he used the intelligent serum to get caught in a spectacular manner......... What a BEAST
r/woosh
 
That flower is open for less than a minute and it's already trying to throw hands.
 
Thank you The Afternoon Teashop for the translation! It was a good translation and we are all grateful for your efforts
 
I hope we see more of Balam-sensei after this arc and he's not just forgotten.
 
@LyallKins This is mostly me talking out of my ass, but;
Page 2: Shouldn't it be "I" instead of "We", as there's only 1 teacher. "I will now return your exam" fit better I think.
Page 4: I'm pretty sure you meant "principal" instead of "principle"
Page 6: I think "And they all" or "And then everyone" fits better rather than "And then all"
Page 17: Shouldn't it be "Balam's bloodline magic" instead of just "Balam bloodline magic". And "The ability to -" fits better than "Able to-"

Again, mostly talking out of my ass, also not a native in english so I could be VERY wrong.
 
@dikdim Ah, thank you for pointing out that error in page 4. It somehow went past my radar for an embarrassingly amount of time. I’ll try to fix that, but at the same time it’s 1:22AM where we live so you might need to wait.

For the one in page 2, though I’d argue that “I” and “We” can be used interchangeably in many cases, “I” would certainly fit the context better.

Though, I would say that page 6, another “Everyone” would be redundant, as the subject has been already mentioned in that same sentence. And for the one in page 17, both are similarly correct in my opinion, as they both talks about the characteristic of the bloodline magic, so the change wouldn’t be very necessary, but we’ll still take your suggestions into consideration.

Thank you!
 

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