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i think you might want to check the grammar and spelling again but seemed mostly readable
 
it doesnt need to be Shakespeare, as long as it makes sense and it's readable.

Thank you for the effort. Please keep it up if you can.
 
When there were no updates for 2 months and you get one "smol cliffhanger" in shape of feet
 
> check grammar/spelling
Agree. Get a proofreader, especially if English isn't your first language. Not trying to be mean, but it's necessary to go from 70% readable to 100% readable.

Do appreciate someone picking this up in the interim. Been wondering what happened to the previous group myself.
 

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