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Kaarme Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 11,142 Feb 21, 2020 #2 Quite a solid short story. Not exactly a Hollywood ending, though.
KiTA Group Leader Joined Mar 11, 2018 Messages 922 Feb 21, 2020 #4 Day before, or day after? Because if his body was found the day before he last saw him, that means it was a ghost that gave the crane to him. If he died the day after, it's just normal everyday non-supernatural tragic.
Day before, or day after? Because if his body was found the day before he last saw him, that means it was a ghost that gave the crane to him. If he died the day after, it's just normal everyday non-supernatural tragic.
SiraX Joined Jul 23, 2018 Messages 63 Feb 21, 2020 #6 Wow I actually got sweaty eyes from a 4page short, this hit a bit too close to home.
E Erogami Joined Aug 7, 2018 Messages 598 Feb 21, 2020 #9 Goddamn it! I came from the fluff and turn out it was a den of onion-cutting ninjas...
alexeric123 Joined May 11, 2019 Messages 48 Feb 21, 2020 #11 Dammit, I was seeing so many fluffy oneshots that had a cover like this. I went in expecting the same.
Dammit, I was seeing so many fluffy oneshots that had a cover like this. I went in expecting the same.
Gap Group Leader Joined Feb 6, 2019 Messages 84 Feb 21, 2020 #12 @KiTA Yeah, he was already dead. That's why old dude wondered why the kid went out of his way just to give him the note.
@KiTA Yeah, he was already dead. That's why old dude wondered why the kid went out of his way just to give him the note.
Svelandria Joined Mar 5, 2019 Messages 1,057 Feb 21, 2020 #13 @KiTA The dude mentioned that the kid was already dead when he received the crane, meaning the last time he saw him was after his body was found. The kid was already dead, the dude just didn't know it yet.
@KiTA The dude mentioned that the kid was already dead when he received the crane, meaning the last time he saw him was after his body was found. The kid was already dead, the dude just didn't know it yet.
W Walter_vi_Britannia Joined Mar 27, 2019 Messages 2,367 Feb 21, 2020 #16 That's enough for me, seems like it's time for me to go to bed now.
D Duainfey Joined Jul 10, 2018 Messages 655 Feb 21, 2020 #19 Well that revved up into unexpected darkness fast.