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If only this is about MCs father, It would be much more entertaining. MC is kinda bland and uninteresting
 
What was the point of adding a reincarnation subplot to the story if it doesn't have any play on the main characters personality, he fully acts like being an orc is the norm despite retaining former memories of his time as a human, wouldn't you still have all your regular human sensibilities rather than screaming something stupid like "I Should have been born an orc!" to his mother? It's really weird and makes almost no sense to include it unless you're doing it simply so you can get that stupid isekai tag that's all the rage right now.

He doesn't have any of the characteristics that you would expect from someone that retains memories of living as a human in a human society, He even acts like he's never seen a woman before beyond orc females and his mother, which is just really stupid for lack of a better term.

Well whatever I guess, It's pretty apparent that this isn't a serious story at all and more of a tongue and cheek fluff piece but I'm still annoyed by the lack of decent writing already extremely noticeable in the very first chapter.
 
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At the beginning I was like: What?
By the middle: She did what with the orc?!
By the end: why would you name him "Ork"
Weird, I know.
 
He have a high chance of being human in his former life as well but wishes to inherit more orc genes in this life because of the village kids..?
Idk on much of any girls of the other tribes that can actually be happy and willing with a orc pushing them down without some kind of charm skill..
That cat/fox chief looks freaky among the other tribe leaders.
 
Orc and elf, that combination will yield disaster! Meanwhile I eat loli for breakfast.

@Crash21
Could you please link the source of your avatar?
 
The mother is an airhead, but good on it's own way.
Like really which mother ever told you to 'get strong and get woman' all I ever heard is 'be useful to society' and ask 'when will you get married'.
 
If we completely ignore the few "I'm reincarnated" sentences, the story make (more or less) sense.

But with it:
- Why do he say to his mother that it's her fault you aren't a full orc (and that you are weak for the same reason)
- Why doesn't he try to train a little? As e human (or any living creature), training and practice should be the base (and don't make me think that orcs are just stupid beasts that punch without training or weapons...)
- Why does he act as if the "human featured" girls are beautifully and it's the 1st time (in his 2 life) he see some?

Another bug problem: Why does his name is Ork, when he is an Orc... I understand the mom's Stockholm syndrome, but she should still have a brain!
 

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