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Solid translation man. Easy to read and everything made sense. If anything, the words could be a tad smaller so they could fit in the bubbles a bit more nicely.
 
thanks for the scanlation. really like this series, emily is super cute
 
Pretty good. Since it doesnt seem like pochacco is coming back, I welcome you as the new translator.
 
@cooltapwater Keep up the good work!

I do agree with what YearLobe said, the text could be made a bit smaller so it fits better in the speech bubbles, but other than that, it was pretty good.
 
@cooltapwater Great effort! You'll need a proofreader/editor to reword some of the lines for clarity and brevity i.e. make the sentences shorter without losing their meaning so they can fit into the speech bubbles better, e.g. "quickly, move!" to "move, now!" and "here I am worrying that you got sick or something." to "and I was worried you got sick or something"
 

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