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Grammar has some issues, nonetheless I can still understand the story. Keep up the work!

also, demon queen oppai OP kek
 
I'm happy for a new translation, but good lord, you need a proofreader.
 
This translation is really hard to read. Even the comment at the end is gibberish, saying that it isn't "proofreded".

At the very least, run your script through Grammarly before typesetting. That's no substitute for having somebody who knows English proofread it, but it's better than this mess.
 
This manga looks pretty fun. I hope things work out and we see more of it ! Thanks !
 
Please invest in a proofreader and give it another try. I gave up trying to understand it about halfway through.
 
I wish I knew Japanese so I can proofread it for you guys but I hope this is continued.
 
its look ok so pls keep translation this manga \(^_^)/

and the old group is back after 2 months (-__- )
really the new guy just translation this manga and 5 hours later the old TR come out from woods and say we are back god damn it there going to be a war, are we??? (-_-)
 
so she had inverted nipples?
Thats the only thing i can see which would distinguish the two.
 
It's not proof read but the next one will be... is that how that works? just skip it and proof read the other one
 
@ZeroWWE I'm pretty sure Galaxy Degen Scans started posting a bunch of chapters a few days ago and said that some rl stuff happened so they hadn't posted anything but, they probably just happened to have finished the chapter at the same time as this group and just uploaded it later. Hopefully the two groups can just talk it over instead of getting into an unnecessary fight.
 

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