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Can't put my finger on exactly why, but everything from the art style, pacing, translation and even font choice bothers me.

Probably safe to say that I won't read more.
 
The translation... Even my 6 yrs old cousin speak better english than this...
 
why are these disgusting people on the cover with the MC ? Are we going to keep seeing them ?
 
so they insulted and ditched the 13 yo because he was way more powerful than them and more useful than the girls? those arses are on the cover but I hope we don't get to see them again
 
@Mintlin @Akera93 Most likely they will keep popping up in the story from time to time. This is a kind of the new fad in Japanese webnovel community, a "success story after being expelled from the party; also, screw you former party members" trope. It's basically always started with the MC got expelled from their party, then after that MC actually got better life going on while the author periodically shown how MC's former party slowly getting screwed over and over due to the lack of MC's presence/skill/expertise.
 
So they just basically stole the 13 year old’s kills and are gonna make money off of it. What a trash party.
 
It was painfully hard to read...but thanks for translating it. I hope you find someone who could help you in proofreading.
 
Painful TL aside (thanks for doing this BTW just take some time proofreading next time), the party is actual scum. Honestly glad for the kid that he got out of it so early.
 
Translation is quite bad, but I have seen worse
If you want to continue translating this manga, I hope you could get a typesetter, proofreader, and ofc better fonts

Thanks for starting this project :)
 
I’ve been so conditioned by harem isekai that i thought the dragon at the beginning was going to turn into a big titty girl that becomes his really zealous follower
 
Peple who complain from translations that are okay, and have all kinds of complaints..

You should try translating or helping out in qc/typesetting since it seems you could do it better :)
 
Before working on next chapter, if you managed to get better TL and proofreader, please work on making v2 of this chapter. As it is, this chapter translation is near unreadable.
 

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