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Lol went from weirdly slow to skipping the fight when it got interesting. Poor pacing in either case
 
Huh, so that's the shikigami's head, huh.. I thought it was a bunny doll.. it would be funny to see a strong shikigami jumping around slashing everything while carrying a bunny doll.
 
The pacing went from slow as fuck to suddenly skipping time, I have no idea what's going on in this chapter.
 
For those that are getting an error on page two. Turn off the compression feature and it will load properly.
 
The author's storytelling skill aside - Party Scans is keeping a nice pace with this one.
 
@nachtness the manga bad doesn't mean the LN also bad tho, sometimes mangaka fail to follow the story from LN and just become glibberish manga instead...
so yeah, the mangaka just makes the story become hard to understand
 
@Raffro : tl;dr is MC copied the fire guys' techniques to give himself time to summon shikigami because surprisingly despite all his cheats he can still take damage (or maybe the substitute doll simulate 'normal human' defense)

Proceed to summon a loli, who then easily win the match for him and none of it is shown because clearly who need fight scenes...
 
From wasting panels and stretching the fight to skipping time and showing nothing.
Mangaka really needs a veteran editor to pull him into the right direction.
 

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