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I think it should have been part of the manga, not just an extra. Its sad they skipped it.
 
I've only got two critiques. Save your random thoughts and comments for the end page or add a cover page stop interrupting the flow of the comic. If several words are getting chopped up in speech and thought bubbles reduce the font size a little.
 
since it's mentioned there...
the temp. font give more of playful feeling rather than those of urgency...

yep. this sounds annoying, I know. sorry.
 
I find that a lot of artists don't know how to proportion toddlers all that well. They just make them a smaller sized adult in adult proportions lol
 

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