A Stepmother's Märchen - Vol. 1 Ch. 45 - Guardian (4)

Thank you for the chapter ❤️😍☺️

Can't wait for more.
From my POV everything is ok & thank You for additional notes, it help to understand the conversation better
 
lol, definitely a "bit" excessive with the t/n. Please trust your readers more. If we didn't have the cognitive ability to know who and what the story is about and remember previous chapters then we wouldn't be "readers" to begin with. Dissecting the words "you" and "they" as if you were solving the mystery killer in a detective novel when it is so super clear like this is hilarious, but totally unnecessary
 

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