A Story About a Creepy Girl's Smile - Ch. 2

[Roughmutt]

What a fucking chad

 

[havelmom]

why is the chapter hidden
can't hide vanilla from me, fools

 

[Early_b]

Could someone please tell me how many raw chaps are there since on here it says that official pub is finished

 

[FYZdnt]

DDOOOO MOOOOOOREEE!!!!

 

[liquidsword]

@Early_b I think there’s only 2 chapters so far, but I’m pretty sure it only says completed because they thought chapter one was just a oneshot and it hasn’t been changed yet.

 

[Early_b]

@liquidsword ah thats good to know at least chapter releases arent that long then

 

[Tsudow]

Mc has the big dick energy.

 

[Xystus]

ok but why is her skirt so high up her belly?

 

[Jockpo523]

It will sound wierd but I love the dinamic of movement on the drawing. Feels fluent even if the story is nothing new. I like it

 

[henman]

For all those who get "chapter unavailable", try to do shift+F5. Sometimes it helps.

All of their skirts are too high! It looks clumsy! If it's school norm, then it's laaaaame

Also, I find her smile at page 2 very beautiful. Look like the Komi-type idiocy of environment.

@dharman there's some kind of t-shirt underneath. Learn to discern cloth folds from fat folds

 

[Alemoa]

Does anyone know the path to break free of the fluff addcition? I've already sold my house for this shit... I LOST MY KIDS TO BUY SHOUJO MANGO!! I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE! I WANT FREEDOM

 

[Vini]

Next level chad energy, confessing in the middle of the hallway in school.

 

[liroro]

MC's Chad energy is so big, he confessed and it's only chapter 2.

 

[trilling]

Not like, but loves her. Critical hit right there.

 

[Kafka]

@henman The "chapter unavailable" is shown because it's the first time that account has uploaded something and it has to be approved by a mod to show up. Don't kill our servers (or risk getting banned for too many hits) by refreshing constantly :x

 

[Rozoro]

Gotta say the middle of the chapter with her saying "I can't love you" seems like a pretty big mistranslation that doesn't really make sense in context. I only have a fairly rudimentary grasp of Japanese but the official raw has the kanji for face 顔 within that line which is in reference to her "look" or "expression" and isn't referring to the male MC like the translation is making it seem like it is. Other than that great work on the chapter.

Dude is a madlad

 

[Griffore]

@Rozoro
I checked the original and she says: 好きになれるわけないんだよ
こんな顔なんて
Suki ni nareru wake nainda yo konna kao nante

Which roughly translates to: There is no way you can love a face like this.
Or maybe something like "There is no way a face like this can be loved"
And it makes a lot more sense in the context.

 

[DrReaver]

*SLAMS HANDS ON DESK*
FRESH

 

[henman]

@Kafka I open a chapter, it says "chapter inavailable". I open this chapter in incognito mode, it opens well. I return to non-incognito window where I am logged in and hit F5. It says again that chapter is unavailable. I feel annoyed, because it's clear for me that this "unavailable" thing is stuck in cash, which is by the way not very good way for a site to behave. I hit shift+F5 to clear the cash, I get the chapter.
Also, I don't think that any person, if they are not retarded, would hit shift+F5 more than once if it doesn't help.

 

[Rozoro]

@Griffore
Thanks for the Clarification. That's pretty much what I thought I gleamed from the raws as well, though like I said, I only have a basic understanding through my time of studying Kanji using Wanikani and only minor grammar self-study. Interestingly enough though I found that if you input 好きになれるわけないんだよこんな顔なんて into Google Translate exactly it outputs "I can't love you. " Coincidence maybe?