A Story about Confessing Before the End of the World

Tanaka Gakuto, the latest in the long line of men of culture. Descendent of Fooly the mage or of the demon courting hero, or perhaps beginning his own line. May his descendants continue to woo and court the strong and cute for generations to come.

For Humanity and Cuteness.
 
I so very much want to see a longer serialized manga of this, this made me so fucking happy
 
The plot is not bad for a oneshot (albeit not completely original either), but some parts are rather cringey and executed poorly. For example, the parts where she murdered her schoolmates in the school grounds and then the next day she and MC-kun go to school as if nothing happened; you'd think that school's supposed to be out not only because of the afterglow of the (failed) doomsday but also of the dead students. Would've made more sense if the scene that have taken place was her murdering randoms on a random street.

And then we have Frieza-chan over here.
 
this exceeds the highest level of cringe and bad writing
kills multiple people, looks like an insect, nerd still likes waifu because kawaii
smashes the meteor what would have killed her but no le waifu is still alive, the plottwist OMG

its as if someone asked the youtube comment section below those ecchi/comedybloop videos to write a manga
edgyyyy
 
it's like the spin-off of the Demon Girl and Hero in the other manga of the same artist..
 

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