A Sugar-Sweet Dad and a Salty-Sour Daughter - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[razxiko]

Yeah after twooo long years somebody picked it up! I have no complaints on my part, I'm just happy someone picked it up

 

[9764678]

Thanks for the translation!

 

[Mr_1RaE]

@Alee_ex Typesetting needs some work, translation and proofreading seems fine, though maybe it should be "you're being/acting a creep/sleazy?"?

 

[blueRiver]

seems fine to me. Any other series ya'll plan on doing or have done and want some feed back?

 

[robloxoof]

oh shit, never thought this would get picked back up

 

[Angrod]

Incredibly ballsy to go after your boss's daughter

 

[Schneezing]

The drawing style kind of reminds me of dragonball somehow, but its got a shoujo-ey vibe to it

 

[Rozzak]

Dude George Constanza got his pilot canceled for that shit.

 

[selfiesturluson]

@Angrod esp underaged daughter

 

[Houzi]

Holy shit this is a throwback, thanks for picking this back up!

 

[BCS]

@Schneezing right? It's kind of refreshing.

 

[Freyasword]

@Alee_ex when you type for speech bubble try 'center text alignment'. Thank you for picking this series!

 

[henrykez]

yo, thanks for the translation
my only criticism is that some text not in a speech bubble was left untranslated, like in the last panel of page 14.
also, this is just a personal preference, but I would prefer a different font.

 

[KhalE]

Thank you for translating! This comic has meme potential!

 

[Filuth]

Agreed with that last dialogue changed to "You're being a creep" and you might wanna change the font to a more comical one like animeace etc.

Also sfx doesn't really need to be translated but some words outside of the speech bubble need to be translated for the sake of coherency.

 

[saredesu]

You could vaporwave a panel or two for ending page lol

 

[lasercats]

Thanks for picking this up, this looks really fun. Also I'm not the only one who thinks this looks like dragon ball right?

 

[chusetto]

IT'S ALIVE!

 

[potatolord132]

Translator, Thankyou!