A Wonderful New World - Ch. 18

So he left the incriminating evidence on a laptop unsecured, that he carries around with him?
I'm out! Someone teach this author to write, many who read adult content are seasoned readers.
This shit is weak AF!
 
Yeah. Really confused how girl could just uncover the evidence. Like what? The entire laptop is empty besides one video of the murder? No password?

I mean just unrealistic, unreasonable. Unless! He wanted her to find it which seems unlikely. I started reading this & dropped it. Now I'm really reading it to figure out how many of these women he ends up enslaving.

Of course I'll take it slow. 5 chapters or so once a week.
 
@Trippersigs22 Hentai kinda kills the boner. Extremely exaggerated swagger moans of a hentai girl. At least moans in JAVs feel more real...

And well, the art for some pornhwas when it comes down to H scenes is better than the average ero doujin lol
 

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