After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy

Well for what I'm reading, this was a waste of potential... Too bad, the premise was really interesting.
 
It started off kinda interesting, but then there was this whole bloated exposition dump and I don't really feel like memorizing a fictional Wikipedia, so...
 
"Hey guys the dude you attacked was actually my brother and you kind of kidnap me could you find him for me pls?"

problem solve next arc please
 
why dont she told them that his male part wasnt wanting to harm her?
 
novel is decent, this is rather meh in comparison. such a shame.

still could never stand the initial misunderstanding being left alone for ages...
 
The concept of 1 person controlling both a male and female body at the same time is an interesting idea that has been brought up for a few years now, and the author has decided to try to give it a shot writing a story about it.
Unfortunately the story makes literally no sense.

I wouldn't call this spoilers, but as mentioned by other posters,

the main plot point hardly plays a role in the plot at all. They live in a society with TVs but also apparently they hunt bandits, which is a weird clash of technology settings. The MC also immediately ruins his male body's reputation and does nothing to correct it and reinforced the bad reputation for no reason immediately.

Pretty trash overall, I give it a 1/10.
I would hope someone else would take a stab at writing a better story using the plot point of controlling 2 bodies.
 
dont be too harsh this novel is purely for fun reading/comedy and author doesnt bother to justify like Kono Subarashi
 
@dreminh it's not fun if the stupid isn't well written.

and whole chapter exposition is no fun in comedy. well whole chapter exposition is no fun in most cases comedy or not.
 
it quite fun at some part like the time he running into the knight , yes it is stupid, i mean the MC doesnt use much of the brain, doesnt remember the past nor the world setting and all thank to the carefree character it even feel retard at many point, still fun to read
 
this is just unreadable garbage... comedy or not, the main protagonist is so incomprehensibly stupid its not fun, its just retarded and annoying, in chapter 6 he actualy makes them belive his male half was actualy assaulting his female half... and thats after they tell him that they will kill people on sight for things like that... and then the protagonist never even bothers to correct this?
considering the protagonist dont know what will happen if one of the bodies dies makes it even more retarded...

this is just the typical chinese garbage writing you would expect from a mawhua.
 
Saw this on the main page, though I already saw it before came to look. Still bad and shitty as the first time I tried it. And by the comments, I am not alone, although I might be quite more harsh than others.
 

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